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Term 2
 My goal is to move my writing from 2p to 2a
Week 2
 I used a metaphor ...lost in the ecstasy of this tantalising treat.
Week 4
 With my recount about lying I gained a 2a & I know I could have achieved a 3b if I had
if I had used more words from the cameo.
Week 6
 On my report about cave wetas I achieved a 3b+. I felt pleased with this result.
Week 8
 My speech topic was Zoning should be banned. I gained a 3b.
Term3
 My goal is to move from 3b to 3p in recount writing
Week 2
 In my poetry I put in a personification...my dad is the beef tough and strong.
Week 4
 In my poetry I placed in a simile...exhilarating like a rocket and achieved 3b
Week 6
 In my recount I put in a adverb...Gradually.